So this is just something that hit me over this past week, Ariel and Jim Hawkins. Which is so cool! I really like the idea, so this is what I've got so far;
The New Arrival
Setting: Erics castle
Chapter 1
Jim stud looking out into the sickening green sea, looking for answers to his many questions. He sighed as he lowered his head, looking into the murky water, seeing only a blurred reflection. So many memories lost to the deeps of Triton. A hand rest on his left shoulder, he looked to the subdue face of Caption Jack.
Mate, for get about her, shes long gone. His words slur as he turned away, and gave orders to tie the ship off. Jims face turned melancholy, as the thoughts of his youth returned to him: her red hair floating in the water, her eyes bluer than the sea or sky, and her laugh, her laugh some none short of perfection. He took in a deep breath as he looked at the tawny coloured castle, with its red flags swaying in the breeze. He turned away from the horizon, walked over the oak deck of the ship and stud between the cross walk, gazing out at his men, hard at work, and the once mythical land. He stud straight up, straightened his jacket and began walking down the plank. As he neared the dock, he hindered: stared at the back of a women, with long, flowing, red hair. His heart froze.
It couldnt be, no! She has a fin, shes a mermaid! Theres no way that she could be standing right in front of me, theres no way! Jim refused to believe that the women could be the one which he has longed for, for so long.
HAWKINS! his thoughts of the girl vanished, as the caption called for him, COMEHERE. Caption Jacks words slurred together. Jim hesitated the approach to the caption, yet when he arrived, Caption Jack threw his arm around Jims shoulders, introducing Jim to the man who was paying for the shipment of goods.
This is the best damn Co-Caption, that, that damn Capital gave me. Caption Hawkins, JimHawkins. Jim could smell the brandy on Caption Jacks breath, and cringed. Im sure youll be fine Jimbo. Caption Jack swayed to and fro as he walked off. The tall man looked at Jim and smiled,
The names Eric, its nice to meet you Caption Hawkins. Jim smiled back in reply, but his eyes were else where. She still had not turned to show her face: which made the anticipation much greater. She was busy talking to another woman, who Jim had never seen before. Eric caught notice of where Jims eyes were, and patted Jim on the shoulder.
Ariel! Eric called out her name, the name that Jim was looking for. The name that would never leave his heart, that name which he had been looking for, for so long: it is her! Memories of their childhood began playing within his mind.
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~SQ
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Why do we fall?~SQ
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don't piss me off. i'm running out of places to hide the bodies.
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TEH EPIC WIN!!!
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